I don't understand why most of the members here just viewed and send kisses but never message me.
First and foremost thank you for your comment. Everybody is here for some reason but not to learn English. Being not a native speaker got always an error. And to tell you frankly google translate not even accurate in translation. I don't think so finding a friends or someone to be with will depend on English.
RE: I hope to find a man in my life.
I very quickly lost interest in reading, " I am. If..." A little help with grammar and spelling can be found on .Hope this helps.
Iyyov
RE: Review my profile and reply if interested
I would suggest getting rid of the photo with the wires. The outdoor photos seem most appealing. Always try to shorten things up. Many, especially guys, have short attention spans. So start reading your profile and see how long it takes. Too long? Then shorten it. Hope this helps. :) And the guarantee is very speculative. I would say "hope" instead, or something similar.Iyyov
RE: I don't understand why most of the members here just viewed and send kisses but never message me.
You have two problems, both of them minor: 1) your English isn't great, though it is quite good. 2) The profile is a bit long. If you use: , it will help you very much in correcting the English. Just use you best language and have it translated into English. That's what I do when I'm speaking Spanish. My spanish isn't good at all, but is good enough I combine it with the google website. The other portion is just any good writing. Set it aside for a day or two and say things as concisely as you can.I hope this helps.
Iyyov
RE: Honest opinion
Hi,For someone who is persnickety and actually reads the profile, you have some errors that should be corrected. Here's an example that everybody should have mentioned: "im looking for a man who is comfortable with themselfs and knows who they are". Numerous errors in just this one line. Here's how I'd correct it: "I'm looking for a man who is comfortable with himself, and knows who he is." See the difference?
E-mail me if you'd like, when you have it all fixed, and I'll be happy to review it again.
Shalom,
Iyyov
RE: review review review..............
u are not Persian at all
True Artists are ready for positive & negative comments.
I thank you for being direct with me.RE: ladies and gentlemen i apreciate your honest opinions about my profile and picture thanks in advance
It's a pity you're just seeking women and it's worse I'm not one to please you. You're totally well done...almost perfect I'd have to confess. ?? ????
RE: I don't understand why most of the members here just viewed and send kisses but never message me.
You sound like a lovely woman. Your profile is not the problem, this site is.Try pof.com, free and much more people than here.
RE: With No Honesty There's No Trust....think about it.
No, you do not sound desperate at all. Your profile is nicely written.RE: Please give me an honest review
Your photos are fine. Your age requirement is not very realistic....not at 35 yrs old, and definitely not on this website.RE: Honest opinion
Honest, open and graceful.RE: True Artists are ready for positive & negative comments.
Your profiles gives a clear idea of who you are. I like it.
RE: Honest opinion
Stunning beauty. Stunning sincerity.
RE: Profile Review Please... :rolleyes:
Hi,I am maria.
RE: Let me know
Your "Match Info" is too wide. It looks like you didn't fill that out yet with what you want in a man, and your profile picture has sunlight in the way. You has take another profile picture that is a clear picture of yourself that's of your face and at the same time it has to show your body type in the profile picture that you have listed in your profile.
RE: Profile Review Please... :rolleyes:
Hi how are youRE: Profile Review Please... :rolleyes:
Hi,your right .RE: foxy
Hey foxy ur pics are adorable, beautiful.
Subjectus imperfecti
Needs more fighting...RE: Chances that we take...
You have a very nice profil, and text, wich to me is quit good, and stat out clear, what you are trying to find.Nothing wrong with your profil nore your profil text.
To me, you are just from the wong country ( to fare away from my country that is )
RE: foxy
A lovely mask, Does make one wonder what is beneath.RE: what do you think of my picture
I would say too forward for a profile pic. Maybe you have pants on, who knows.The appearance is as if you don't.
Make pictures you would want to see, not what will fit in your aperture. It does require a little time and reshoots, digital pics are free, shoot liberally.
RE: are my pix ok?
Your pictures are fine. i just wonder who it is you are trying to be.Chances that we take...
Thank you for your helpful review Mr. Many Names. I am open, yet I want guys that are older than me even when you say 1 year does not make any change. It's just what I want.Regarding my description of my profession, you're absolutely right! Thanks for the suggestion. I'll follow it.
RE: I've been single for 5 years. What's wrong? My look?
Lose the picture of the guy kissing you. Huge turn-off. I'm semi-vegetarian. Now you know. And it doesn't take a book to say it. Shalom.RE: Knowing what others see...
You have a camera in your hand that will take lots and lots of photos. There is no reason to have just one. Dress differently, and use variation. Pull your hair back in one or two. You look like you are probably very attractive, but one sample with your hair in the way doesn't work too well for me. I think you'll do great with more pictures. If you have kids, let each one pick a favorite photo if they want to. Then you automatically get somebody else's opinion. :)RE: What do you think about my profile :-)
Hi, You have a Masters Degree and can't write complete and descriptive sentences about someone that might want to spend the rest of their life with you? What is wrong with that picture? If you just had a HS diploma, I'd maybe be okay with it, but I've seen much better from those with only a HS diploma.You may be healthy, but your pictures look a little too thin, mostly your neck. Maybe try a scarf or turtle-neck so as to not emphasize this?
RE: Just got a message telling me my profile is scary and he'd be intimidated by me .... what you think?
My opinion is that your profile is very negative. I think what you say about your job running the soup kitchen is great. But saying that you "spend most of my spare time in the city centre feeding the homeless which I really enjoy." sounds like you would prefer to be there rather that with the man looking at your profile.My opinion is keep the "soup kitchen" comment, and completely re-write the rest. I'd never reply to such a profile, except in a "profile review".
Just my opinion of course.
Shalom.
RE: Just got a message telling me my profile is scary and he'd be intimidated by me .... what you think?
So intimidated, He just had to tell you that you were scary. lolYou are fine.
RE: Just got a message telling me my profile is scary and he'd be intimidated by me .... what you think?
I actually like your profile. It reminds me of myself... Direct and to the point. I think certain men may be scared bc they are cowards, irresponsible or not ready to grow up! Only those type of men would be intimidated by you! ?? Best of luck to you!
RE: Rate me??
I think you are a STUNNING BEAUTY ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Smiles , JoeRE: Not much luck
Can not see your face ! ! Joe
RE: Just got a message telling me my profile is scary and he'd be intimidated by me .... what you think?
You have written 7 paragraphs, how many good things have you said in them?Read your profile, would you date you?
I don't understand why most of the members here just viewed and send kisses but never message me.
Thanks