The Ghost

An extremely short story, by me. smile


“If you are a ghost,” said six-year-old Noah, “why do you look like a person? If you no longer need a body, why do you still have to look like you’ve got one?” Before the ghost had chance to answer, Noah continued, “And your clothes; are they ghosts, as well? How can a pair of trousers become a ghost?”

Whereupon the ghost stopped believing in itself and vanished as quickly as it had appeared.

The End. drinking
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It started out as my plan for what to say if ever I was haunted in the night, BD, but I never got chance to say it. It seemed a shame to waste it, so I thought I would make it available to anyone else who might need to deal with a nocturnal apparition.
Well, it's somewhat comforting to know that these spirits will visit while properly dressed!
cool
If i had the art of becoming a ghost by night, i would visit the houses of CS MEN and scare the bejesus out of them......rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
You should be okay with CS men, LaFonda, just avoid six-year-olds.
I have a story about a haunting, Harb. It was my first time trying stand-up comedy at an open Mic. I had barely gotten started when I heard a low, monotonous "booooooo" coming from somewhere in the room.

I thought it strange that a ghost would choose such a place to rattle chains and such, but I trudged ahead. The show must go on, after all.

More boos, but I paid little mind and by the time I had finished my set, the room was echoing with a chorus of "BoooOooOOoo".

Maybe I was creating these ghosts? "Oh, my gosh", I thought. "I'm really killin' 'em!"
head banger
I was on a late afternoon train with my daughter, then aged about 4 years old. We had stopped next to a somewhat derelict hotel waiting for platform space into Cardiff Central.

"Building's burnt down", she pronounced with some authority.

I replied, "No, it's just empty and falling apart because noone is using it."

"Building's burnt down", she repeated.

I tried to explain the disrepair again, but she became tetchy.

"Building's burnt down!"

I heard a few days later that the fire brigade were called to the blaze just after the witching hour.

The one subsequent to our journey.
Jac, if my mother ever dreamt about someone, we knew we'd see their death notice within a short time.
Your story is longer than mine, Jac. mumbling
Did your mother have a lot of nervous friends, Molly?
Lots of dead ones anyway
Hey Jac.. wave

She may have been trying to say - 'building's burnin down - as young children have a fairly keen sense of smell, just sayin.. wink
That Noah boy didn't go on to build a big wooden boat with lots of animals on it, did he?
I enjoyed this blog and all who participated.

I'm in search of Noah's ark, the ghost
Yeah, that had crossed my mind too, BJ, but I also have a keen, childlike sense of smell.

I think I've either spent too much time with dogs, or given I'm a deaf old git with the need for reading glasses, something has gotta work. laugh

We were also in a fairly sealed smelly old train carriage in the centre of a fairly polluted city about 50 meters away from the building.

Besides, don't ruin my story, it was longer than Harbal's. snooty
I have never seen a ghost. So now I know they look like people.

Will I get in trouble if I asked someone, " if you are a person, why do you look like a ghost?"

Would they disappear?
dunno

Harbal wave
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